Glimmer, If ever
knowing deepest thought? Faded.
Widen natures, owned, Fixed glory'ed fathers?
all to lose, What. Gnaw. Uncontroled.
Unforgiven v Glory, beneath is, shall float from
conversations history; recieved, stumbled.
Did not! fix glory'ed, Fathers only!
thou think to banish, Ber
Lost, are you? lostand lonely.
Weep'and view; fall of man, But. Ohh, Aerr
to late? to mumble? to open
those are old! shattered, but can fix, shining, gold!
Eyes to slow! NO, No no, still crossed fingers.
waiting
But i.... You failed. by DanielGeorgiou, literature
Literature
But i.... You failed.
Smile, don't take
smell, don't breath
slithered voices.
In the ceiling,
in the.
-Silent. Stop
Smiling? can I smell?
can it be more likened
over there. Do I. Bait?
Clothed but naked
OHH -will it come
Me. Little of faith
i like your poems too. they can appear to be like all this randomness except then it all makes sense when you look into it a bit.
i like the way they can seem like conversations, whether with yourself or others, its as if you are writing down what you think as you think it, rather than doing heaps of revising of it to make it seem more refined or polished or something.
Daniel your poetry is so powerful and intellectual... So many questions, so many answers that have no correspondance to the question asked. why do thou doest this? gasp! hither.